Once upon a time there was a cat that slept in a jungle for a year. A human goes for a walk in the jungle and finds a cat and then chases it. The human lost the cat as the cat is hiding in the settee. The human got a concrete truck. The concrete truck drove over the leaves and twigs to get to the settee. The concrete truck concreted the settee with a cat. The human lived happily ever after in the jungle.
Hi, I did enjoy your story although it does seem a little muddled. Keep an eye on tense, you have a mix of past and present here. Great effort, keep it up.
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Your story was funny but a little bit horrible too!
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Interesting story writing and a good effort. Well done.
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