Personification in 3/4B

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-_- *Day in the life of a book* -_-

Every morning I sit inside a classroom in a book holder. Guess what I am? A book. Every single time its spelling I get the rubber and he rubs me too hard. The pencil pushes too hard everything is so bad I hate it so much. But on the bright side I like the taste of lead.

*My Xbox 360*

My Xbox feels happy as a bunny playing in fluff. When my Xbox heats up after me playing it, it feels like a volcano has erupted and like I threw it in a volcano. When I use him the controller vibrates like my Xbox is laughing. When I’m not playing my Xbox its cold like it’s on holidays and it’s in a pool. My Xbox smells like some lollies are on top of the Xbox or inside it because it’s just been to a party because I just taken it with me. He looks black and green and my controller is green and black as well. When he is angry he turns red and black and he doesn’t want to play with me. So we have to get him fixed…(To be Continued.)

Stickers

 Every day is a bad day, stuck in the same spot in the middle of a crowd, around the same stickers all the time. If we’re lucky these giant super heroes come and save us. The superhero is always Ms Ballenden. But she also spoils the party. She gives as to super ugly weirdoes. They have NO responsibility for us. They usually drop us on the ground like rocket speed. We just sit there until the superhero finds as again.

 

My rubber doesn’t like it when it has to rub out the lead because every time my rubber has to rub it’s face gets screwed up and it has to put its eyes, nose and mouth back in the right place.

It gets so angry it feels like it is going to explode. It like the weekends because it can finally have a rest!!!

By Sam

A Day In The Life Of A Pen

Hi I’m Lucy’s pen and I am going to tell you how I feel every day. I start my day by yelling at her and saying “Lucy get your stupid hand here and use me.” Then she replies with “Shut your lid I already told you Mrs. B needs to give me a pen licence. She is as stubborn as an army leader.” “Just break the rules this once” I say “NO”.

At morning tea and lunch I get ever so lonely and I am surrounded by pencils. IT’S NOT FAIR she uses her pencils ALL THE TIME. She shades with them, she writes with them and she even chooses them over pens at home! I feel so insulted, sad and jelly all at the same time. My favourite subject would have to be art because she might want to use pen instead of a dull, ugly lead pencil I also like marking because she has to use pen sometimes. That’s the day in the life of me a pen

DA END

It is me Christians chair here. He puts his jumper on me every day and it is really annoying. It is like I’m going to explode in to little bits. And I always get pulled in and out. The most annoying thing is getting tucked in- it hurts!! The weight of him really squishes me and his butt hurts really bad like a 70 stone man.

 

 

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