Personification in 3/4B

We have been learning about personification as a way of making our writing more interesting. Check out some of our efforts.

-_- *Day in the life of a book* -_-

Every morning I sit inside a classroom in a book holder. Guess what I am? A book. Every single time its spelling I get the rubber and he rubs me too hard. The pencil pushes too hard everything is so bad I hate it so much. But on the bright side I like the taste of lead.

*My Xbox 360*

My Xbox feels happy as a bunny playing in fluff. When my Xbox heats up after me playing it, it feels like a volcano has erupted and like I threw it in a volcano. When I use him the controller vibrates like my Xbox is laughing. When I’m not playing my Xbox its cold like it’s on holidays and it’s in a pool. My Xbox smells like some lollies are on top of the Xbox or inside it because it’s just been to a party because I just taken it with me. He looks black and green and my controller is green and black as well. When he is angry he turns red and black and he doesn’t want to play with me. So we have to get him fixed…(To be Continued.)

Stickers

 Every day is a bad day, stuck in the same spot in the middle of a crowd, around the same stickers all the time. If we’re lucky these giant super heroes come and save us. The superhero is always Ms Ballenden. But she also spoils the party. She gives as to super ugly weirdoes. They have NO responsibility for us. They usually drop us on the ground like rocket speed. We just sit there until the superhero finds as again.

 

My rubber doesn’t like it when it has to rub out the lead because every time my rubber has to rub it’s face gets screwed up and it has to put its eyes, nose and mouth back in the right place.

It gets so angry it feels like it is going to explode. It like the weekends because it can finally have a rest!!!

By Sam

A Day In The Life Of A Pen

Hi I’m Lucy’s pen and I am going to tell you how I feel every day. I start my day by yelling at her and saying “Lucy get your stupid hand here and use me.” Then she replies with “Shut your lid I already told you Mrs. B needs to give me a pen licence. She is as stubborn as an army leader.” “Just break the rules this once” I say “NO”.

At morning tea and lunch I get ever so lonely and I am surrounded by pencils. IT’S NOT FAIR she uses her pencils ALL THE TIME. She shades with them, she writes with them and she even chooses them over pens at home! I feel so insulted, sad and jelly all at the same time. My favourite subject would have to be art because she might want to use pen instead of a dull, ugly lead pencil I also like marking because she has to use pen sometimes. That’s the day in the life of me a pen

DA END

It is me Christians chair here. He puts his jumper on me every day and it is really annoying. It is like I’m going to explode in to little bits. And I always get pulled in and out. The most annoying thing is getting tucked in- it hurts!! The weight of him really squishes me and his butt hurts really bad like a 70 stone man.

 

 

3D in 3/4B

We looked at the “Sculptures by the sea”  exhibition photos and then we used a variety of materials to create our own sculptures. We are very proud of them. They look great hanging in our room- thanks Mrs Goodyer.image image image image image image image image image image image image image image image image image

Tyler 100WC

One dark, or should I say, one haunted night, Hansel and Gretel’s dad came back from his camp and took them into the woods. There dad rested. Hansel and Gretel found and candy house and began to eat it. The witch inside the candy house, grabbed Hansel and Gretel. She put Hansel into a cage and pushed Gretel around the place. Just as the witch pushed Gretel, Hansel unlocked the cage pushed the witch into the fire. They got out of the candy house before it burnt down.

Ten years later, Hansel and Gretel grew up to become witch hunters and they saved a lot of kid’s lives.

Natasha 100WC

Once upon a time there lived a busy young girl called Snow White. She had a smelly donkey called William. One Wednesday arvo Snow White went for a ride on her donkey. Suddenly, Will flicks her off. He flicks her so far that she finds a huge castle and she sees a small beast names Shrek. When she approaches the castle, she gets a black bag placed on her head. When Shrek takes the bag off her head, she is locked up in a huge, blue room, which is full of brown furniture with the small, creepy and feral beast. Soon they get closer and closer. They fall in love so deeply they were never to be seen again.