One grey and miserable night a giant sandwich came to life. Brave explorers came from all over the world just to find it, many never seen again. One day hundreds of years later a young hyena adventured into ancient ruins of the sandwich god and found a mysterious cave. It was a little bit of a climb to get to it but it was worth it. What took explorers their whole life to find this young hyena found with pure luck. Inside the cave he could hear moaning and groaning like someone or something just ate spicy beans. Suddenly a…
Stage 2 Branxton 2015 
Wow you have certainly written a cliffhanger! We really want to know what happens next.
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What a very imaginative story. I loved the phrase ‘he could hear moaning and groaning like someone or something just ate spicy beans’. It made me laugh. Then you left us with a cliffhanger. Well done on clever writing.
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