One day a lovely beautiful girl was walking in the wood then she came up to a sign saying the enchanted forest, she went through it. There were wonderful things, then she came up to something that was tangled up with leaves and flowers. She untangled the vines and then she saw a stone lounge and cat she said why would there be a lounge in the enchanted forest. She said to herself maybe if I sit on this chair I could bring it home. Then she ran home and asked her dad if he could have it but he said no.
Stage 2 Branxton 2015 
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You have used some great description in your story so that the reader really knows what is happening in it.
Next time i wonder if you can think of other words instead of said to use in your writing?
Well done and keep up the good work! 😀
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